Looking for any advice for this 16mm project.....

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I'm trying to do a short 16mm movie called "Get On The Ground". I built a facebook for it https://www.facebook.com/pages/Get-on-T ... 7787909936 and was wondering what you guys might think?... Even shows the rolls of 16mm waiting in the fridge.... By the way, I'm probably going to have to do this facebook page over because I can't get back into the facebook I used to create it, so I guess I lose the 20 likes that it took me a while to get. But since I have to rebuild it anyway, would love to know what could be done to make it better this time around.... Thanks