As I mentioned in the previous thread, there are various things I would do differently but, overall, I'm pleased with how it turned out.
Here's the final via a quick snapshot:

And here's a detail from the painting:

Enjoy!
Roger
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Thanks!lunni wrote:You have a good moody feeling there with nice surface detail and all!
I would have preferred to have the horse walking but it didn't work out that way when I was shooting the reference photo and I'm not a good enough painter to fake it. I can on some things but not on animals and people. I wouldn't say the horse looks flat and lacks shape but I do agree that it looks stiff or, rather, both the horse and cowboy look "posed". Movement would certainly have added some depth and dimension to the horse and rider.lunni wrote:Thing that bothers me is the cowboy and horse. They make the composition loose and they lack depth and dynamics. Horse is very stiff, like it was wooded. Horse is flat and it lacks shape (3d). There is kind of cut-out-of-paper feeling in them.
Yeah, I kind of felt that way afterwards, too. In reality, they are exactly the right size for the shot but I think the problem is in the detail. When doing a painting like this, you have to determine the level of detail you are going to use throughout the painting and I was just too rusty to maintain continuity throughout. That can create a false impression of differences in scale. Something I need to work on. The same thing with the river below. In reality, it is about 60-80 feet below and probably several hundred yards away but that sense of distance got lost in the painting process for the same reason.lunni wrote:Also they look too big, like they were giants.
Again, their size and perspective is a perfect match. That is something that I have always made sure of when shooting reference photos to be comped together. However, horses have a funny tendency to shift their weight when standing for a long period. They will push their rear leg forward and under their belly a bit, like this horse did, and it creates an almost Escher kind of effect where their rear leg looks displaced and on a different plane. It is a common bitch among western artists working with horses and the really talented artists know how to compensate for this. I'm not one of those. :?lunni wrote:Their perspective is not quite there either, like they were shot with different focal length than the landscape
lunni wrote:Sorry my intention is not to sound harsh... Other than that it's a nice picture, keep on good work!
hereFrom the Simpsons wrote:Nelson, Ralph, and Martin watch a man paint black patches on a white
horse.
Martin: Uh, Sir, why don't you just use real cows?
Painter: Cows don't look like cows on film. You gotta use horses.
Ralph: What do you do if you want something that looks like a horse?
Painter: Ehh, usually we just tape a bunch of cats together.
ccortez wrote:If I had a paint-by-numbers kit and paid a professional painter to complete it for me, it wouldn't come close to what you were able to accomplish after a long layoff.
Some people have all the talent, the rest of us just proudly proclaim the genius of our talented friends. ;)
Thanks and thanks. Again, this was really a struggle because I never considered myself a particularly gifted painter to begin with, so trying to do this after 20+ years was both fun and traumatic at the same time. My next painting might not be quite so huge but, on this first one, I figured I needed the extra space to create a margin for error in my somewhat sluggish motor skills.CHAS wrote:I think you did a great job...
Makes me wish I'd paid more attention in my art classes...
Now this is pro talking!MovieStuff wrote:If it walks like a duck and it quacks like a duck, then I must have painted a duck!![]()
Too bad you're both married to other people already, eh? :lol:JCook wrote:Makes movies, builds hardware and paints wonderfully can you cook too?